I really liked your “Fairness” story, but it got hard to understand towards the end. If she’s lying face down and getting it from behind (“body bucking back to meet each thrust”) then how could “her cunt [drip] onto the cock in her asshole?” She’d have to be facing up for that.

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Hrm. This is entirely fair. And an oversight from a revision back when she was facing up.

Loose end tied up, so to speak. Thanks for catching it. Sometimes after reading a story enough times you get so used to it that you lose touch of the details.

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